Showing posts with label revisions. Show all posts
Showing posts with label revisions. Show all posts

Thursday, December 12, 2013

The Ellie McDoodle Diaries: Ellie for President

This book comes out in September, 2014.

Here's the first page in the first draft:



Here's the first page a few drafts later:


Astute readers will notice Ellie's relatives from book 1 are in the crowd scene on page 1 in book 6.
I figured it was time to bring them back for a visit. 

Monday, September 30, 2013

Ellie McDoodle, Book 6: Four *more* first draft pages

Here are four more first draft pages from my Ellie sketchbook for book 6.
There are 170 pages in one Ellie McDoodle book.


^^ Pages 12 and 13 comprise one two-page spread.


^^ Pages 14 and 15 comprise one two-page spread.

Only 155 more pages to go!
It'll be worth it. :)

Monday, September 23, 2013

Ellie McDoodle, Book 6: Four more first draft pages

More pages from my Ellie McDoodle book 6 sketchbook.
I like constraining my sketches to a journal/book format in the planning stages. It adds a layer of challenge.


 ^^ Pages 8 and 9 face each other on one 2-page, open-book spread.

^^ Pages 10 and 11 face each other on one spread.

Monday, September 16, 2013

Ellie McDoodle: Book 6, more first draft pages

Four pages from book 6's first draft sketchbook:


Pages 4 and 5 are one spread.
Pages 6 and 7 are the next spread.



Ellie's grandpa (who, um, doesn't quite have a name yet) is a big supporter of her art. 
My Grandpa George was a big proponent of my work. I'd send him my hand-scrawled cartoons and he'd put them on his fridge and make his visitors read them. I know this because they'd tell me at family parties. I know they didn't mind. 
It felt great (still does!) to know he loved my work, especially since I don't always feel confident about it myself.

Monday, September 9, 2013

Ellie McDoodle: book 6 draft 1

When I talk with kids in schools, they seem to think authors write their books from beginning to end, perfectly, no revisions, and then the books are published.
It's not that simple.
After that perfect writing there's a revisions process that for some authors can take years.
I love revising because a) I know my early drafts are not very good, and b) I know the finished manuscript will be *much* better after lots of careful revisions.

I'm in the revisions process right now for Ellie McDoodle, book 6.
Here are some of the first draft scribbles.




Friday, February 25, 2011

Back from outer space (that's revisions)

After spending many months with the next Ellie McDoodle book I can proudly say that I am done living in a fantasy world and am back to real life for a while. (until my editor's revisions notes arrive... then it's back to not-really-here-ness again).

The next book's about soccer. I learned a LOT about soccer while writing it. (Ellie learns how to properly kick the ball, for one thing)
I learned a lot about life, too -- like, for instance, email still comes even when I am not at the computer to answer it. (1347 in the in-box, right now. I'm starting to think I might not answer them all)
Here's a page from my rough art/rough writing for the book:


This picture has nothing to do with soccer but everything to do with teamwork. And there's a reason for the crazy hairstyles.
I hope this art will make it into the book. You and I will have to wait til next Spring to know for sure. :)